Caroline (crystalcazzie) wrote,

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Story mark II

I wrote a different story. I kept the beginning because I liked it but I changed the rest to make the lead character more sympathetic. And depressed. And I got the original ending I wanted that didn't fit before. I'm slightly worried it's not so much a story as a load of depressed rambling but there's nothing in the description that says a significant plot is important.

I need to check it with the editing checklists and I need to leave it a day or so then come back to it to make corrections and changes. I'm having a bit of trouble with the second part, evaluation but hopefully I'll be able to do that later.

I have four days in which to do all this. I hope I haven't left it too late.

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